hey girl, i just cheked youre portrait of traditional art, and well i just tell you than whatch out for youre tones... some were darker...and you remark alot some aprts of the character, than is something you cant do in this kind of things...you solve it with shades, lights and shadows...
you know but the drawings were good, just watch out on the proportions when you draw real human ppl is the most hard and frustrating. Well if you want more tips about this kind of art well chek my gallery i have 2 pieces i created and ask em questions about it...
i liked youre gallery xD